Neverspeak (iconoclass) wrote in grammarpolice,

no idea what to call this

Here is the sentence:

"Furthermore, [Joyce and Cowman, 2007] found that most post-registration students' primary motivation for pursuing CPD was eminently practical: preparation for job promotions and the ability to take on increased clinical responsibilities were cited by the overwhelming majority."

I know "most post-registration students' primary motivation" is awkward, but is it grammatically correct? Or is this not even a grammar issue?
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